Final Draft Reflection

1. How did your final draft turn out?
I think I did my final draft pretty well. I followed and checked all the rules on the rubric. Personally, I think I did a great job.

2. What did your work on from your previous drafts?
Since English is my second language, I do have a lot of grammar mistakes. So I checked many times to make sure I got every sentence correct.

3. Overall, what was difficult; what was easy for this assignment?
As I said, grammar is the difficulty for me. I have a lot of things that might be difficult for me on such as the structure of the essay and vocabulary. I think the introduction is the easiest thing for me. I do know how to get attention from readers. I can give them an image of my poem and my memories.

4. Overall, what are your strengths; weaknesses in this essay?
Overall, I think my strengths are basically two things. First of all, I always can write 600 words even though I don't try to count all these words. Secondly, I am really good at finding interesting pieces from a poem and pull them out. Such as I could find many words that reflect something more and explain it to the readers. I have two weaknesses. The first weakness is what I just said, grammar is a big step for me to spend more time to work on. The second weakness might be controlling the structure of the essay. I always like to write too many things in one paragraph but have nothing to write in other paragraphs.

5. Finally, if you had more time, what would you work on more to improve this essay?
I would definitely spend more time on grammar and vocabulary to make this essay even more interesting.

6. Look at the rubric posted on the class blog.
What 3 things do you think you will get top points on?
-The structure of my poem(Even though it's hard, but I changed a lot. I think I might get points on this part.)
-Very interesting expression
-Get the points of the poem

What 3 things will you lose points on?
-Grammar
-Vocabulary(Not too many fancy words)
-The connection between sentences.

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